QUOTE(Amlord @ Aug 31 2006, 02:59 PM)

Now entspeak has shown us federal court cases which have ruled that graduation ceremonies cannot be used to proselytize to the captive audience. I've noted the distinction here: the speech does not ask for the audience to join Miss McComb in her beliefs. It simply acknowledges what the speaker believes are the causes and motivations behind her success while referencing the fact that she was not academically successful before these motivations came into her life.
You asked me to provide evidence to the challenge your assertion and here you are again, completely ignoring that challenge. Is she using the royal we? What does she mean when she says, "If
we follow his plan." And asking
us to "
Trust [her], this block fits."
First you claim that proselytizing is limited to imploring. Not true. One need not implore to proselytize. She is proselytizing.
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The NCLB statute covers this issue directly: if the speaker is chosen based upon neutral criteria (in this case, grade point average) and the content of the speech is the speaker's thoughts and not those of the school (as is the case here--primary control of the content) then it cannot be restricted based upon religious (or non-religious) content. The school district's policy mirrors the statute.
Whoa, where does the NCLB define primary control as being the fact that it is the speaker's thoughts? Where does it state that. McComb does not have primary control over the content of her speech if the school can ask her to edit it for content. The school has primary control over the content. Just because the content is primarily hers – in that she came up with it... it is her thoughts – does not mean that she has primary control over it. The school district, in exercising it's right to review valedictorian speeches, exercises primary control over the content.
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The issue here is primary control of content. In other words: where did it originate. That is obviously the student. The school has secondary control of content--it can choose to exclude certain content (sexually graphic content, perhaps) but I have seen no evidence that the school is the primary source of content.
Primary
source is not primary
control, Amlord. You are confusing the two concepts.
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The school, to my knowledge, does not choose the content although it may exclude certain content. It has secondary control.
Wrong. If the school had secondary control, it could only suggest changes and McComb – being that McComb would have primary control – would be able to reject such changes. This is not the case. The school district has final authority regarding the content of a valedictorian speech.
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The last point is that of proselytizing. The speech cannot be used as a vehicle to ask for listeners to convert their religion. I think you would be hard pressed to demonstrate that this speech attempts to do that. Vauge references to "us" or "we" do not meet that burden of proof. And the burden is clearly on the district to show that this speech did indeed attempt to convert the listeners.
Vague references to "we" and "us"? They seemed to be rather explicit uses of those words. Again, Amlord, she said, "If we follow his plan..." Was she using the royal
we? If we follow his plan. If
we follow his plan. What we is she referring to? Her audience maybe? Her captive audience? Come now, Amlord. I don't feel particularly hard pressed after that. That was just one sentence among many. Do you want another instance? Here:
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His love is "that something more" we all desire.
So, to which
we is she referring to here?
This is verging on a sermon. You can just picture a priest at the altar saying these words. Come on... vague? No.
Here's another:
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...provide for us a way to heaven in accepting this grace.
Which
us, Amlord? In a speech to her graduating class, their parents, their friends... which
us?
This isn't vague. When you make a speech you address an audience. She was doing that. They are included in the
we, they are included in the
us. That isn't vague, unclear or ambiguous. It is perfectly clear.
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Lee v Weisman is not controlling in this case.
Really? Genius. But it is a precedent in
Cole, which is controlling.
Lee makes reference to the nature of graduation ceremonies regarding the issue of a voluntary attendance. That is the context.