QUOTE(Sleeper @ Sep 20 2007, 01:24 PM)

My take on this thread is that it is an attempt to lump hate on a man simply because he wrote a song about his love for The United States of America and his pride in being a citizen of that country.
You can lump some hate on me for stating my opinion, but I feel this is the true reason for this thread. Pretty sad.
You are entitled to your opinion no matter how wrong it is.
I like plenty of patriotic tunes penned by patriotic writers. For Greenwood, I question his priorities, although my opinion has changed since opening this thing up. Maybe two grand is a lot of money for him these days. Maybe he got dinked one too many times. Maybe he's sick of singing his 1984 hit over and over again for 23 years.
But you know my motivations better than I do. Yeah, I just started this because Greenwood bothers me so much.
Had nothing to do with things like the title of the thread or the questions asked. And of course my blinding hatred of patriotic songwriters like Woody Guthrie, John Philip Sousa and Katherine Lee Bates (actually a poet) certainly clouds my judgment about a performer walking out on a performance. Also whether a tune is used to make money off of people by appealing to their patriotism, that is, exploiting it. Or if the music biz exploits performers.
Why, you'd think that I couldn't change my opinion on the whole thing.
But I have.
Just for grins, let's take a look at the lyrics of the hit, shall we?
If tomorrow all the things were gone,
I’d worked for all my life.
And I had to start again,
with just my children and my wife.
I’d thank my lucky stars,
to be livin here today.
‘Cause the flag still stands for freedom,
and they can’t take that away.
- Okay, you get to keep your symbol of freedom, maybe enjoy it at the county courthouse, when you lose everything you've worked for all your life -
And I’m proud to be an American,
where at least I know I’m free.
And I wont forget the men who died,
who gave that right to me.
And I gladly stand up,
next to you and defend her still today.
‘Cause there ain’t no doubt I love this land,
God bless the USA.
- So you're volunteering to go to Iraq next? No, that's not what he means. He will defend her, not some foreign land, and I don't think with a gun but with a mouth -
From the lakes of Minnesota,
to the hills of Tennessee.
Across the plains of Texas,
From sea to shining sea.
From Detroit down to Houston,
and New York to L.A.
Well there's pride in every American heart,
and its time we stand and say.
- Kinda lifting lines from other tunes, isn't he? "From sea to shining sea" is directly from Bates, and the listing of places from Guthrie and the Wabash Cannonball -- in fact, try singing the above two stanzas to the tune of the Wabash Cannonball -
That I’m proud to be an American,
where at least I know I’m free.
And I wont forget the men who died,
who gave that right to me.
And I gladly stand up,
next to you and defend her still today.
‘Cause there ain’t no doubt I love this land,
God bless the USA.
And I’m proud to be and American,
where at least I know I’m free.
And I wont forget the men who died,
who gave that right to me.
And I gladly stand up,
next to you and defend her still today.
‘Cause there ain’t no doubt I love this land,
God bless the USA.
- Okay, I get the point -
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Compare Greenwood with Bates:
O beautiful for spacious skies,
For amber waves of grain,
For purple mountain majesties
Above the fruited plain!
America! America!
God shed his grace on thee
And crown thy good with brotherhood
From sea to shining sea!
- No mention of losing material stuff -
O beautiful for pilgrim feet
Whose stern impassioned stress
A thoroughfare of freedom beat
Across the wilderness!
America! America!
God mend thine every flaw,
Confirm thy soul in self-control,
Thy liberty in law!
- America has flaws? Liberty in law? Well, I guess so -
O beautiful for heroes proved
In liberating strife.
Who more than self their country loved
And mercy more than life!
America! America!
May God thy gold refine
Till all success be nobleness
And every gain divine!
- Whoa, heavy stuff there -
O beautiful for patriot dream
That sees beyond the years
Thine alabaster cities gleam
Undimmed by human tears!
America! America!
God shed his grace on thee
And crown thy good with brotherhood
From sea to shining sea!
- Sounds pretty progressive to me -
O beautiful for halcyon skies,
For amber waves of grain,
For purple mountain majesties
Above the enameled plain!
America! America!
God shed his grace on thee
Till souls wax fair as earth and air
And music-hearted sea!
- She figured out another way to say it -
O beautiful for pilgrims feet,
Whose stem impassioned stress
A thoroughfare for freedom beat
Across the wilderness!
America! America!
God shed his grace on thee
Till paths be wrought through
wilds of thought
By pilgrim foot and knee!
- History comes in here -
O beautiful for glory-tale
Of liberating strife
When once and twice,
for man's avail
Men lavished precious life!
America! America!
God shed his grace on thee
Till selfish gain no longer stain
The banner of the free!
- Selfish gain here, which stains the banner of the free -
O beautiful for patriot dream
That sees beyond the years
Thine alabaster cities gleam
Undimmed by human tears!
America! America!
God shed his grace on thee
Till nobler men keep once again
Thy whiter jubilee!
- Yet another way of saying it -
Agree with the sentiments or not, Bates puts a lot more into her poetry, and that's why I like it better than Greenwood's lyrics. I don't hate his lyrics, it's just that they don't say very much and a big chunk is borrowed.
BTW, Samuel Ward did the melody for America the Beautiful. It's an easy one to build an instrumental arrangement around and is similar to the anthem. Just a little music trivia.